I've decided it would be fun to workshop some queries on the blog. But that means I need a few brave souls to share their query. I will post it (without your name, and with the title removed so it's not so google-able) on my blog, with a full, in depth critque of why the query works-- or doesn't.
Then I'll invite my readers to (gently) critique it as well. I'll post one every day, Monday thru Thursday. Friday we'll wrap it up with a discussion about queries.
If it works, I'm going to do a seperate week for first pages. Not the first page from the queries-- I'll ask for new submissions for the first pages week.
SO! If you are feeling so inclined, please post your query on this blog post as a comment. Make sure to put a line break between paragraphs in case the comment box removes any formatting.
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